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Kia ora Alexis, I wonder what you would like to improve in your writing in term 4? Maybe you could add a bit more into your slide and it will update the blog post. I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online.
Kia ora. My name is Asta - Rose and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.The thing I liked about your blog post is the text colours you used for your text and I also liked where you added a nice clear photo of yourself.I think you need to add a bit more detail in your Highlight of learning and the Goal that I mastered.
Kia ora Alexis! My name is Allix and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like your goals, and I also like P.E but next maybe can you please add more detail to your goals. For the title, why is your reflections so interesting? From Allix
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I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online.
Kia ora. My name is Asta - Rose and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.The thing I liked about your blog post is the text colours you used for your text and I also liked where you added a nice clear photo of yourself.I think you need to add a bit more detail in your Highlight of learning and the Goal that I mastered.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Alexis! My name is Allix and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like your goals, and I also like P.E but next maybe can you please add more detail to your goals. For the title, why is your reflections so interesting? From Allix
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